I'd give up but I
don't feel I have a choice but
to keep going on
by bs
A long road ahead.
But it's the only way there,
home to destiny
by Mean D. of So Cal
Diabetes, Stroke
Widower and a father
I will "not" give in!!!
by And Dyslectic of I want no pity
Siabetes, Stroke
Widower and a father
I "must" not give in!!!
by Name witheld
Acceptance is not obligatory
we all have problems
Some strive to overcome them
Others just give up
by William Nippress
Oars in the water
Thinking better than knowing
The constant rowing
by rollercoaster
i am a critic
and a pedantic speller
blame my asperger's
by ash
I'm not a critique
But will praise where praise is due
I admire good work
by William Nippress of in case I piss you off
Rollercoaster's good
They get better and better
making me think hard
by William Nippress
Love those Bad Haiku
by William Nippress
A good word painting
Shines through the dull and murky
Brilliant trinket Vince
by William Nippress
Missed your good haiku,s
Mount Madonna Mama
So glad you are back
by William Nippress
When an adult cries
It becomes problematic
in front of a child
by rollercoaster
heaved forth by cold
the hard ground erupts
with stones
winter's offerings
by mount madonna mama
the bare branches bend
dancing stiffly in the wind
a harsh minuet
by mount madonna mama
1101
1001 1
010
by vince of binary haiku
shine in shallow depth
imbued with wishful thinking
lone fountain penny
a trinket for dreams
not belonging anywhere
or to anyone
by vince
I appreciate
I've too much time on my hands
Need to get out more
by William Nippress
Wish I'd written that
Wonderful Haiku of yours
I must try harder
by Basho kinsaku of Matsou Munefusa Sobo
Clinging clumps of snow
Weigh heavy on slender branch
Bowing low to Earth
by William Nippress
Where are you Ash?
I still laugh at your humorous
Allah a snack bar
And that was years ago
by William Nippress of You OK?
Life is too short
Mask an ugly heart?
Choosing the right mask helps you
Hide it from mankind
Deep man! DEEP!!!
by William Nippress
Insular Haikus
Convey easy understood
Human conditions
by William Nippress
Give a man a mask
And he will tell you the truth
Oscar Wilde said that
by rollercoaster
views come through your mind
your mind goes through the motions
things happen and then
by pulled in ..move out..close your eyes..remember
mask or learned lessons
art versus maturity
to know is telling...
by nature
the first reaction
is always the truthful one
masking one is art
by vince
a child reacts
without clear thoughts..and just like
excited people
by i am surprised u r surprised
the audience takes
its own issues but never
up on stage themselves
it's all yours guys...
do unclean things, whatever, don't want it
by bs
I don't need to look
my brother had it.. best friend
a few teachers..sure
by world class disease
even better though
fresh air..sunshine..long walk..hugs
that's what I needed
by i fucked up
the shit hit the wall
then it slighty slathered down
much like a feeling
by massage/hiot tub/blowjob/sleep..that equals taking two and calling me in the morning
once upon a time
there was empathy, balance
hey baby what's wrong
by okay..no big deal..move on
Bipolarism
You should look it up online
You seem to have it
www.angelfire.com/journal2/bipolarism/
by Anonymous Poet
Never a couple!!
But I will fuck you
That is "a friends zone"
Or he doesn't fancy you?
by You choose
this love is my time
essence of speed kissed with waves
takes spirited flight
by tuesday
lovely then venom
dried up on my teeth once tastes
so good, dried up crust
by bs
and so like the waves
of the sea, emotions are
tossing and churning
(reminds me of ice
cream makers)
by bs
You asked why no one
Liked your Bad Haiku's?
Stop looking for approval
I told you now lead your own life
by Its Haiku of Read "about haiku" see above
felt under my skin
black not very soft but kind
the touch of a shot
by kim
Groundhog Day is done
Valentine's Day is coming
Every Day is Here
by rollercoaster
never ending snow
damn groundhog like the movie
same storm same storm same....
by bs
life of the seedling
rescued from the spoiled earth
the gift was given
by pink clouds and lol s crosses it makes perfect sense to me
you are kind to a
fool of a man, we weave one
large poem as one
by bs
"i poured my heart out.
it evaporated, see?"
- a ben folds five song
by vince
legalism is
counting sounds instead of just
pouring your heart out.
The attempt to fit
focuses and refines, but
is not what matters.
by snail considers formal poetry restrictive
Is it normal for
males to have a "friend zone," or
do I have a chance?
by snail
no saves, on life left
mario confronts bowser
the dishes can wait
by vince
in the end all is
in cycles of lows and highs
and otherwise split
by bs
ok snail...remember
legalism and think
scribes and pharisees
by bs
