It is easy to be critical
without enjoying anything
for some reason some people enjoy
saying someone else's stuff is shit
without even trying to like it
by Moxie
Wish I could keep that style up
here I get caught up in the in fighting
I write like Louis L'amour on depressants
by Moxie of TO K for being creative...
from my perspective
criticism is easy
without credentials
by ash_against_people_writing_endless_comments_'cos_they_can't_write_succint_haiku
strong criticism
brutalised by your abuse
my heart is breaking
by ash
Misunderstanding;
I loved the posted pictures
As much as 3D
by Janis
Thanksgiving is done
bird bones simmer in water.
Fall colors fading.
I think of the time
we teased vegetarians.
Enjoying all that
meat.
by k_against_everyone of oh yeah and I forgot to mention Mellie, what a fuckin crackpot!
It seems to me that
people who write so much on
their dicks, must be small.
by k_against_repetitive_subjects of why did scott get special treatment from Janis over his idiotic 3d/2d haiku and Janis bitches at me for cool pics from Klee?
So is that all you
guys find to talk about here?
Yanking on your dicks?
Seriously folks,
it gets really quite boring.
Try thinking for once.
by k_against_stupid_minds_and_stupid_haiku of to ash, ap, anti-social, ronin, moxie, scott, comicat and any other penis obsessed contributer i may have for gotten. And Janis
Try to toast a sinner
and you sin yourself, and go with
the sinner, down and you knew better
because you died again
by Moxie
dumb kid envies cock
He wishes his was bigger
But it remains small
by anti social
the kid scratches crabs
He enjoys watching them crawl
They infest his crotch
by anti social
If you are still here
I mock you oh so badly
You read my dumb works
by anti social
I challenge you to
write some poetry that rhymes
said the ignorant
by anti social
The dumb prick sits there
He's stroking the salami
We all move away
by anti social
Poop-shoot punnisher
Is what they call the fat man
It must hurt a lot
by anti social
Your car may be black
You may think that it's fast, but
Your mom is faster
by anti social
Once white, now yellow
Do not eat this stuff it's bad
somebody peed here
by anti social
weaving left and right
moving up and down moaning
grandma has a cock
by mellie
futile politics
players weaving left and right
grandma has a cock
by ash
ones toss thier fences
nothing wrong with awareness
oh but "rights" judge more
by Jeremy
Jeremy is mad.
Filled with teen-aged angst; no logo
has warped fragile minds
by Right Wing Capitalist Pig
Fucking dumb leftist
Spewing lame-assed rhetoric.
Marx was a retard.
by Right Wing Capitalist Pig
simple minds; your Toast
you choke on lengthy man meat
fucking sausage Sub
by Jeremy
patriotism
on every fucking car and shirt
get a clue, you twits
by ghx of dfw
the fake love
fills my mouth with bile
die, you bitch
by ghx of dfw
Id rather pass on
knowing that I die with a
sense of purpose here.......
by Jeremy of NH
(this makes more sense)
An obese waistline
is better than a swollen ego...
Patriotism--
--right next to Egotism
by ComiCat of Jerzey
An obese waistline
is better than a swollen ego...
Egoism, right next--
--to Patriotism
by ComiCat of Jerzey
Complacence keeps peace
amongst the ignorant fools
petty imbeciles
by ComiCat of Jerzey
these fucking sponges
cannot blossom properly
bland complacency
by Jeremy of NH
result of your cheap
instant gratification
society = bliss
by Jeremy of NH
"fat" america
fucking supersized masses
very well might pop
by Jeremy of NH
please eat mcdonalds
profitable empire
selling you cancer
by Jeremy of NH
when the masses enter
useless dwindling bandwagon
this dying nation.......
by Jeremy of NH
total losers are
people who fail to see the
bullshit around them
by Jeremy of NH
perhaps you shouldve
been in one of those buildings
when they tumbled down
by Jeremy of NH
moxie may be bad
but at least he contributes
you yank your yaya
by ash
such cheap amusement
shows almost no skill at all
you total loser
by ash
if you had a dick
it would be very tiny
but sadly you don't
by ash
choke on that, you dumb
ass losers from this site, you
all fuck your mothers
by flooder