recalling the past
you think i'd get over it
even now i don't
by ash
many a long year
and some even longer days
life is full of it
by ash
Well-done Dragon Snail
Now you're writing good haiku's
These we can enjoy!
by We are still watching though
Screaming pain in chest
It tears a man asunder
Torso rent of life
by Eh
I love your music,
little hippy drummer boy.
Can I play your flute?
by Cat Crotch
A body, a cage,
shapes to hang upon a soul,
stuck within this skin.
by Dragon Snail
if one wants to say
something else, let them eat grapes
and pass the times as
by mox
these folks art in thought
and limit things as to when
to keep the...the...pace
by moxie
we made out last night
never mind bodies entwined
still fancy a shag
by Technokoi of Venice Beach
Maybe I should find
a less complicated way
to release the pain.
by Dragon Snail
When I missed the point,
differing goals were the cause.
Minimalism?
by Dragon Snail (confused, as usual)
Restraint of 3 lines
Express minimalism
Multi-line fuckers
by Janis of Toronto
Courageously here,
after years of fear and doubt,
I am reaching out.
Exploring freedom
I fled the cruel abuser
who imprisoned me.
The pendulum swings.
Confidence blossoms and wilts.
I will not look back.
by Dragon Snail
Summers full vestage
Surrounded by vivid Green
Senses overwhelmed
by William Nippress
Well that told "US"
So lets all get on our knees
Ask for forgiveness
We have met our match?
Worship the self-important!
Who does not need rules!
Its Zabadooey
Returned in disguise? Or what
Huge ego? No brains?
You have potential
Some of your stuff is not bad
So stop writing crap
by We will see what you can do
Simplicity is
sometimes insufficient to
allow expression.
I bend rules to make
them fit my needs rather than
bending to fit them.
by Longwinded Dragon Snail
I've never been much
for following any rules
except for my own.
If it bothers you,
I can fit tradition, but
it's not as much fun.
Limits are more like
inspirations than rigid
barriers for me.
by Dragon Snail
I agree Haiku
Not Poems broken in lines
But some times you just
Gota express your
self, you know what I mean
Though better than thinking!
by Self expression will Out.
george carlin is gone
and I hate the fact he's gone
no more of his jokes
by bs
poems divided
into lines of the right length
aren't really haiku
by ash
She played herself a
lullaby, but the focus
of fingering her
instrument kept her
from falling asleep. It was
like sex, distracting
from its purpose with
the physicality of
its form. The feel of
fingers on metal
and wood kept her too conscious
to fall into the
auditory shapes
that moved like a mandala
as she closed her eyes.
by Dragon Snail
Is losing the spark
of language, concretion that
connects thoughts to sound
a simple step that
inches so carefully that
we feel no motion
but an absence at
stopping, or is expression
transfigured, growing
into something more
delicate and harder to
capture? Once I had
words like colors or
subtle impressions, changing
like notes of music,
fast enough to sketch
my feelings mid-flight. Now I
have only the wings.
by Dragon Snail
I lost my language
when I lost the bravery
to fail fearlessly.
Creativity
led to punishment, so I
shied away from both.
What doesn't kill me
never makes me stronger. It
just hurts more next time.
by Dragon Snail
Insecurity
prevents expressive freedom.
Don't criticize me.
I stop drawing when
the price is greater than the
pleasure of doing.
You roll your eyes and
criticize the fact that I
am so sensitive.
The situation
implodes and I withdraw. You
are just not worth it.
by Dragon Snail
haiku warrior
I challenge you to battle
I'll be the victor
by bride of destructo
Nutty castrati
Look, regina dentata
It's just a cigar!
by Destructo of Paranoia
So furry and brown
A beaver with sharper teeth
Chew chew chewbaca!
by Destructo of Quibbles
A careworn merkin
Insert obscure reference here
Keeps the lice at bay
by Destructo of Poopyshoots
Fecal fingerprints
undigested evidence
Well, what's for dessert?
by Destructo of Mysterioso
I give a shit too
silent bears shit in the woods
everybody poops
by Destructo of Humdrum
what i really saw
was an odalisque in brown
thought it too arcane
by Lush
toilet paper smudge
a Rorschach Test in two-ply
saw a vagina
by Lush
So you "have a cow"
Where you going to keep it?
You and cow not same?
by Destructo of Conception
Existence of cow
allows cowboys to bind them,
No cow, no cowboy.
by Destructo of Smartypants
Spontaneous flow
Brown cows utter fluid hymns,
Milk, cream, butter, ghee.
by Bovinity of Magic cow
Unbeknownst to most
observation determines
Drop in the ocean
by Destructo of Big Aha!
An old sewage pond
Then a frog goes and jumps in,
my kids have three eyes!
by Destructo of Dystopia
Galactogogues in droves
Seek sweet succor in the teat,
Follow the milky way!
by Hieronymous of Kabosh
Lumpy proletarians
Invalid validictatorians
Eat of me, allyall.
by Destructo of Home, sweat home
A brown cow chews cud.
Grass locks on target sunlight
My mother this earth
by Destructo of Destruction
Lime green limosine (sp?)
Big kids ride in the long car.
Are you not amazed!
by Destructo of Perterbia
When I write a poem
I write what I know is true
Hint at the sublime.
by Destructo of Homogeneity
She's feeding the birds
Cacao covered carob nubs
seagulls go caw, caw!
by Organico of Utter depravity
Big bad naugahyde
Indulgent pleather pleasures
A man of the cloth.
by Plushy of Happytown
A renaissance fair
Puffy skirts and pirate shirts
B.O. Aroma
by Pure Hearted Harlot of Banality
New age vortex maps
magic's in an open mind
Give me your money.
by Fistula of Ani
Magnificent words
Like tintinabulation
tell me nothing new
by Mugwort of Swamp
pontification
abstract amelioration
join raider nation!
by Pretensio of Ultima Thule
Workers in cubes move
like creatures trapped in cages,
scanning the exit.
by Dragon Snail
Nothing to do but
play music all day, happy
not to have a job.
by Dragon Snail