Matsuo Bashō
Bad Haiku
Haiku #46728
midnight, blackest sky
the smell of satin and sweat
humid air like claws

an overhead fan
spinning lazily, rattling
head bobs up and down

awaiting release
money put on the dresser
he pretends to sleep

washing by the sink
while avoiding the mirror
the businessman snores

pulling the boots on
the night sticks to her insides
it will not wash off
Haiku #46728
Posted: April 6, 2010 11:20 am ET
Poet & location: vince of hong kong