Matsuo Bashō
Bad Haiku
Haiku #46207
your discernment's poor
like the kid who says "I shot
you dead. Stay down!!"

no matter how you
try you can't exert your WILL
to create feelings

that originate
from the inside out so please
stop shouting "You're dead!"
Haiku #46207
Posted: February 10, 2010 12:26 pm ET
Poet & location: For Anonymous supporter of DAD