I have submitted many attempts at haikus here, you guys Vince, Ash, etc, need to stop using this as a forum...
LISTEN- HAIKU SHOULD EVOKE IMAGERY, not be a essay... read Bashu... read Jack Keurac (american Haiku on Youtube) ---- even forget about the sylables (english Haikus dont count sylables anyawy) --- JUST FOCUS ON THE IMAGE ----
OLD POND,
FROG JUMPS -
SPLASH