Matsuo Bashō
Bad Haiku
Haiku #44423
the breeze too cool
celestial cathedral
dying summer night

finding the bus stop
in silence, i thought i knew
she had things to say

stars darkened as much
no loving kiss at her door
only her good-bye

should have begged, but how
did she mean forever then
or it's just for now?
Haiku #44423
Posted: September 1, 2009 4:38 pm ET
Poet & location: vince