Matsuo Bashō
Bad Haiku
Haiku #4363
Soft warm tongue, gently
teasing the edges of my
breath, burrow wormlike

through the wound of your
redemption: an opening
designed to hold you.
Haiku #4363
Posted: September 15, 2000 10:17 pm ET
Poet & location: Kimberly Dawn Sowell of Naiad, Neptune